Friday, May 20, 2011

Words instead of SAID

What words could you use instead of SAID to paint a better picture.

Retype the sentence each time with a specific word...

"Come here," said Mrs Foggin

e.g. "Come here," whispered Mrs Foggin

Remember to put all of the punctuation in!
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26 comments:

  1. mitchelMay 23, 2011 at 9:47 AM

    miss walker flipped to the circus

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  2. Samantha and KaylaMay 23, 2011 at 9:58 AM

    Words for WENT.
    .Walked
    .Creep
    .Ambled
    .Limp
    .Pace

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  3. Miss WalkerMay 23, 2011 at 10:57 AM

    Mitchel, Samantha & Kayla- make sure you click in the correct place before you start typing. This is words instead of SAID.

    Have a look at Jacob's example in the next post.

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  4. mitchel 24May 25, 2011 at 9:33 AM

    go to your room YELLED mrs foggin
    come here cryed mrs foggin
    go to your room wissped mrs foggin
    come here roard mrs foggin
    come here panted mrs foggin
    come here say's mrs foggin
    go to your room tiddletailled mrs foggin

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  5. JacobMay 25, 2011 at 9:33 AM

    Come here yelled Miss Foggin.
    Come here shouted Miss Foggin.
    Come here whispered Miss Foggin.
    Come here mummbled Miss Foggin.
    Come here cryed Miss Foggin.
    Come here panted Miss Foggin.
    Come here say's Miss Foggin.
    Come here roared Miss Foggin.
    Come here titeltaled Miss Foggin.
    Come here said Miss Foggin.
    Come here boomed Miss Foggin.

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  6. charlotteMay 25, 2011 at 9:33 AM

    Mrs Foggin yelled to the class "go to your desk".
    Mrs Foggin wispered to the class "go to your desk".
    Mrs Foggin cried to the class "go to your desk".
    Mrs Foggin moaned to the class "go to your desk".

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  7. SavannahMay 25, 2011 at 9:34 AM

    Mrs Foggin yelled to the class go to your desk.
    Miss Walker whisperd to Emma to go and line up for the Aselembley.
    Mrs foggin cried to miss Walker to go and get her lunch she couldn't be bothered.

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  8. EmmaMay 25, 2011 at 9:44 AM

    Words instead of said

    I shouted in the cave
    I yelled in the cave
    I whispered in the cave
    I howled in the cave

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  9. williamMay 25, 2011 at 9:46 AM

    I yelled at my sister
    I whispered to her
    I shouted to her
    I whaled to my sister
    I cried to her
    I mumbled to my sister
    I fired to her

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  10. SamanthaMay 25, 2011 at 9:50 AM

    Replace words for SAID
    Did you do your home work shrike
    Did you do your home work cry Samantha
    Did you do your home work mumble Samantha
    Did you do your home work called Samantha
    Did you do your home work shouted Samantha
    Did you do your home work whisper Samantha
    Did you do your home work snap Samantha
    Did you do your home work mutter Samantha

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  11. connor hMay 25, 2011 at 9:51 AM

    i yelled at my brother
    i whispered to him
    i whaled
    i shouted
    i cried
    i mumbled
    i fired
    i moped

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  12. samMay 25, 2011 at 9:52 AM

    I yelled at my brother
    I screamed at my brother
    I shouted at my brother
    I cried at my brother
    I whaled at my brother
    I mumbled at my brother

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  13. PaigeMay 25, 2011 at 9:56 AM

    Go to your desk whispered Mrs Foggin.
    Goodbye cherped Miss Walker.
    Does everyone have there homework books demanded Miss Walker?
    It's time to run around the track Miss Walker told us.
    It 's your turn to go down to the shop Tony explained.
    Your friend called Valerie called.
    Everyone must go tidy their desks right now Miss Walker wailed.
    It's inside play Miss Walker yelled but don't go crazy.
    Hello a Black Bird cherped.
    Go have morning tea Miss Walker moaned.
    You will watch this movie wither you want to our not snaped valerie.
    ft

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  14. kaylaMay 25, 2011 at 9:57 AM

    go to your desk whispered Mrs foggin.
    goodbye Miss walker.
    goodbye chiled Mumble Mrs Foggin.
    goodbye teachers moam Mrs foggin.
    Goodbye cred the teachers mrs foggin

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  15. KATE GIBBSMay 26, 2011 at 9:34 AM

    come here "moaned," Kate!
    come here "shouted," Xiomara!
    come here "Grizzled," Sonja!
    come here "Whipered," Peita!
    come here "Screamed," Charlotte!
    come here "Squealed," Samantha!
    come here "signed," Savannah!
    come here "exclaimed," Emma!
    come here "cried," Paige!
    come here "laughed," Jasmine!

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  16. kate ramsayMay 26, 2011 at 9:34 AM

    "Come here" shouted Kate.
    "come here" moaned Peita.
    "come here" Grizzled Xiomara.
    "come here" cried Samantha.
    "come here" Screamed Emma.
    "Come here" explained Savannah.
    "come here" Paige eplained with expresion

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  17. connormMay 26, 2011 at 9:35 AM

    go over there shouted Connor.
    go over there whispered Connor.
    go over there screamed Connor.
    go over there mumbled Connor.
    go over there signed Connor.
    go over there talked Connor.
    go over there mated Connor.
    go over there yelled Connor.
    here they come sang Connor.

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  18. jasmineMay 26, 2011 at 9:35 AM

    "Be quiet" roared Mrs Foggin.
    "Go to your desk" whispered Miss walker.
    "Come to the mat" vociferated Xiomara.
    "Please go away" bellowed sam.
    "Stack the chairs" breathed peita.
    "Get out your maths books" mumbled Mitchel.

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  19. christianMay 26, 2011 at 9:35 AM

    'go over there' whispered miss walker.
    'lets go to the shop' shouted Connor.
    'look over there' screamed Christian.
    'look out' mumbled Tom.
    'over there' signed Alistair.
    'came here' replied William.
    'there he is' yelled Sam.
    'where is he' muttered Connor.

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  20. fraserMay 26, 2011 at 9:53 AM

    Yay! yelled Sam.
    Ahhhh! screamed fraser.
    ouch cried campbell.
    thanks wispered miss walker.
    i don't know riplied kate.
    go away snarled ruben.

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  21. SonjaMay 26, 2011 at 9:53 AM

    "Go to your desk" Yelled Mrs Foggin.
    "Where is it" Complained Xiomara.
    "Yes" Muttered Kate.
    "Good bye" Replied Sonja.
    "What" Shouted Peita.
    "OK" Whispered jasmine.
    "Fine"Mumbled Kayla.
    "Bye"Cried Paige
    "I don't mind" snapped Emma.
    "No"!!! Wailed Erin.
    "Oh No" Howled Ella.

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  22. xiomaraMay 26, 2011 at 9:54 AM

    come here yelled mrs foggin
    where is it whispered sonja pateintly
    what shouted peita
    long a go started sonja
    where are you muttered xiomara
    are you coming questioned miss walker
    hello replied sam
    do i have to complained william
    hi how are you chattered reuben
    really answered kate
    oh no said xiomara
    yes mumbled emma
    i don't wanna cried paige
    i will not do that snapped samatha
    i don't like you snarled jasmine
    why was that wondered mitchel

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  23. PeitaMay 26, 2011 at 9:54 AM

    "Woo Hoo" cried Sonja, "Oh be quick" Muttered the old shop owner," Hey you can't talk to her like that!" screamed Kate G "Shh!" whispered Xiomara "What ever." back catted Peita "Peita don't be so incredibly rude!"Sharply replied Kate R.

    "123" Miss Walker roared "Look at me the large class replied with enthusiasm. "What do you want." snarled Conner H "I'm just wondering if I may borrow your pencil?" wondered.
    Ruben.

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  24. CampbellMay 26, 2011 at 9:55 AM

    Run Campbell yelled Tom.
    Faster faster mouthed Campbell.
    Earthquake screamed Callum.
    Go over there whispered Alex.
    Hello Tom mumbled Paige.
    No I can't cried kate.
    Sorry whined Ruben.
    Goodbye muttered connor.
    Good morning mrs Joanes replied mr Reed.
    Good day lad coughed Stanley.
    Good after noon burped Karina.
    Hi ya sneezed Ed.
    Get out of here snapped the teacher.
    Go over there exclaimed the students.
    Woof woofed the Dog.
    Moo mooed the Cow.
    Meow meowed the Cat.
    Do your Jobs explained Miss Walker.

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  25. AlistairMay 26, 2011 at 9:55 AM

    "Go over there!" shouted Tom. "Go over there." muttered Tom. "Go over there" whispered Tom.
    "Go over there." mumbled Tom. "Go over there!" yelled Tom. "Go over there" mouthed Tom.
    "Go over there" cried Tom. "Go over there" moaned Tom."Go over there" snapped Tom. "Go over there" exclaimed Tom. "Go over there" wailed Tom. "It's inside play" explained Miss Walker. "La la la la la"
    sang Tom. Moo moo moo moo" imitated Campbell.

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  26. TomMay 26, 2011 at 9:55 AM

    "Earthquake" squealed Alistair.
    "Tornado" screamed Campbell.
    "Flooding" yelped Christian.
    "Awesome" I shouted.
    "Cool" whispered Reuben.
    "Great" boomed Room 6.
    "Cyclone" screeched Conner.
    "Movie time" moaned Miss Walker.
    "COOKIES" yelled Cookie Monster.
    "ELMO'S WORLD" exclaimed Elmo.
    "Ruff ruff" mumbled Blues Clues.
    "Post the comment" instructed Mrs Foggin

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