Have a go at creating your own story on http://storybird.com/
Miss Walker wrote this story. You can embed your stories on your ePortfolio.
Rabbit's Dream by bimwalker on Storybird
Walker's Wizards Writing
Thursday, August 4, 2011
Friday, June 17, 2011
Watch this slide show on how to write good explanations. Once you've done that you need to click on the link and brainstorm all of the words you would use in a COMPOST explanation. When you have finished, you can print this out and glue it into your writing book.
Wordle Cloud
Wordle Cloud
Friday, May 20, 2011
Words instead of SAID
What words could you use instead of SAID to paint a better picture.
Retype the sentence each time with a specific word...
"Come here," said Mrs Foggin
e.g. "Come here," whispered Mrs Foggin
Remember to put all of the punctuation in!
Retype the sentence each time with a specific word...
"Come here," said Mrs Foggin
e.g. "Come here," whispered Mrs Foggin
Remember to put all of the punctuation in!
Words instead of WENT
Write as many words as you can that could replace the word went in this sentence...
Miss Walker went to the circus.
e.g Miss Walker raced to the circus
Miss Walker went to the circus.
e.g Miss Walker raced to the circus
Sunday, May 1, 2011
Holidays
What did you get up to in your holidays? Write a short recount or narrative about something that happened over the break...
Wednesday, April 6, 2011
Friday, March 25, 2011
Character Description
WALT: Describe a character
We Need To:
- Describe their appearance
- Describe their personality
- Include their hobbies and interests
- Include anything else to help your audience get to know your character
- Include your personal voice... How do you feel about them? What do you think about them?
Remember to be selective with the similes that you use- don't use too many.
Try hard to use a range of sentence starters.
Write a comment to describe this handsome man.
Remember if you like someone's description, leave a comment for them
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